Semester 1 Assignments with Feedback |
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"Your essay is well organized around the focus of your
paper. A thesis statement, which a writer returns to over and over, is so
helpful to the writer to help stay on task! Rather than discussing
generalities, you aim to be specific and use details and examples to support
what your paper is about. Good.
Your writing demonstrates good form and conventions of writing. There are no
grammatical errors. Typos and spelling errors are absent which indicates you
proofread adequately."
103-6 Therapeutic Relationships and communication skills – Marita Molloy |
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"You made good use of your time to practice some of the therapeutic communication micro skills including empathy, warmth and respect with some areas for improvement noted.
Upon analysis you were able to recognize your communication strengths and
areas for improvement. You refrained from giving advice as much as possible.
Good! You communicated effectively and allowed the client the opportunity to
tell their story with you facilitating their storytelling. Silence is also a
powerful communication tool. You clearly spent a lot of time on this project
and did a good job critiquing your ‘performance’ and commenting on
strengths/weaknesses. Your reflection demonstrates a high level of
insight and critical self reflection. You elucidate your thoughts and feelings
well.
You did a very good job overall Kristina and I hope that this experience was
beneficial for your personal and professional growth."
103-6 Therapeutic Relationships and communication skills – Marita Molloy |
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"Good effort Kristina, you have demonstrated a thorough knowledge of the goal attainment model. Good
structure, logical progression of ideas. Good
overview of model and introduction to subject theory."
101-6 Basic Concepts and Contests of Psychiatric Nursing - Donna Klingspohn |